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Literature Exam Poem by ~TheTriangle:iconTheTriangle:



Oh the sullen air around us,
All our carful care confounded!
Let us go!
Let us live!
And please don't tell us how we did!
I don't want to know!
I wish I didn't care,
How my scribbled words will fare.
Just let me leave,
I have nothing to write!
I can't even breathe!
I don't want a fight!
I must escape!
I need to get out!
For god's sake!
I just want to shout!
It's finished!
I'm done!
It's all over!
I'm free!
Not punished,
I'll run!
Nor early,
I'm me!
On time
The Sun!
Exact.
Precisely!
IT'S OVER!
Complete!
I'm FREE!
At Last!
To be me!
What a laugh!
All the stress,
Its gone!
Now I wish you the best,
And so on and on!
©2008-2009 ~TheTriangle
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Author's Comments

I wrote the first few lines in my literature exam on Thursday, and have since added a bit, I was going for a very stream of conciousness thing, and also a bit cluttered and confused, as that was how I felt about the thing.

Thing's I'm not happy with include the way it ended, it seems a bit sudden to me. The line 'i'm me' for very obvious reasons, and the switch from 'we' to 'I' but anywho, here it is.

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